Sunday, August 21, 2011

Research Paper

The doom paper is almost finish thought i put it up here to get some feedback
Research Paper

2 comments:

  1. Pretty good-but what about the context? I'm not sure of the "history of the debate" so that I can fully grasp your claims(the literature review). What about the refutation? ;-)

    Prof Aaron.

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  2. I like the argument, but make sure to revise. Change affect to effect, and have the works cited page double spaced. Overall, I liked the argument.

    Jeff

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